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- The story is shorter than the 1st version. I get rid of the ice cream scene and the water puddle scene. It is a shame that we would have the change to animate water impressions and ice cream (coldness). But to be realistic, there are already alot of works. I think I made a right decision.
- There is one extra enviornement created where the milk machine sucks the kids.
- The story is more interesting to watch now. It is generally changed from being a bit serious to more fun.
- The characters have clearer personalities.
- Caution: though there are more funny elements in the story, i don't want to lose the arty looking of the film.
New ideas to make the scenes smoothly flow:
- People sardine-jamed in the bus, hardly can move. Snivel pops, then the city set appears.
- Flowers come out of mum's clothes. The flowers will symbolise mum throughout the film.
- One pipe from the milk machine comes really closer. We see the internal of the pipe mouth. Then when the camera zoom out again, it becomes the boy's wild-opened mouth and we see him dropping into the milk tank.
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