Animation#10+Review

Rough out the beginning sequence with sound:
--"Tommy, are you ready, we are going to the farm today remember?" said the mum.
--"Yes, mum. Can i adopt a little chicken from there, and a piggy, and a cow so i can drink fresh --milk..." said Tommy. Sounds dissolve. (dialogue is discussible)
--noise of footsteps
--noise of openning the door
--noise of a car passing by, and street crowd (all dissolved)

--then they will get on the bus
--noise of the bus, doors open, close, bus departs
--breaths of crowd
--noise of people pushing
Problem: the first wall looks confusing; how we tell it is the mum? (with sound? working?)

Also chat with Mike and Jared.
keep it experimental, but be nice to audience
make people to guess about the internal cause of what they see
Jared mentioned the same thought as mine: if there is a question, people should be able to find the answer by the end. i can leave them thinking, but not confused.
it becomes a sound driven piece, so get the soundtrack done quickly
beginning: sound dissolve (thanks Mike) + image and colour fade in
shall i animate a shot seeing both mum and boy from a 3rd person view?

To do:
Break down the soundtrack
check out "The Conversation" by Francis Coppola
"Daredevil" title sequence, the Brailes merge into texts (thanks Rag)